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adjectives, alliterations, characteristics, concept, elements, figures of speech, idea, lover, nature, pen-portrait, picture, qulaities, reverie, rhyming words, symphonies, synonyms, temperament, vision
Not literally on the fixed pattern of an ode, but the feel is of one. 🙂 Attempted by me and my friend. It has a few uncommon words whose meaning too is not the typical lexical meaning often construed, but yes, very much lexically & contextually accepted ones in English. Pardon us for that but it was an attempt. They are what you said two different pieces. The link is the last line in between , there … to add continuity but yes his lines talk about his idea of his lover and mine talk about my lover’s .. 🙂 This poem is also for Thursday Poets Rally 41
The Most Creative Poet Award
Siddharth says~~~~~~
singing soft syllables stitching symphonies
melodiously mending, mellowing my miseries…
toiling through tough turbulent testing times
salvaging souls spreading sweet smiles …
collected, cool companion candidly confronting complications
livid lively levitating lustrous, love’s laminations….
emotional enduring ecstatic enchanting eyes ensnare,
foster faith, flaunt feelings, forever, fires flare…
holding hands, healing hurt, heralding harmony
moulds my mind, makes me merry
gods genuine grace generously granted
tumultuous time terminates, thanks to thee…
start ! speak ! say something serene,
Senorita , sing symphonies…..
Vinay said:
so you’re writing about ur signor and he about his senorita? 🙂 very nice.. 😀 and some beautiful unique imageries to both takes! loved it.!
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Purvi said:
heheh.. yeah. Thanks for the wonderful appraisal Vinay. Would love to hear more often from U here.. 🙂
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Vinay said:
I knew I’d heard the poem name before when I saw at the rally 🙂 So I have 😉 hehe. And yes, I’ll try to be here whenever I can 😀
Rally Week 41 – My Poetry
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zzbaggins said:
i love your word play purvi and siddharth.
this was a delight to read!
🙂
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Purvi said:
I am glad U enjoyed it 🙂 its a pleasure indeed!
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Jingle said:
stunning word play.
welcome to poets rally.
🙂
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BUTTERFLIES OF TIME said:
what a wonderful mastery over the words,enjoyed the dialogues very much.
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Amropali said:
I like the form. It’s unique.
Happy co-authoring.
hope you write more.
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Silvertongue said:
Wow! Wonderful work!
The Ode and alliterations have been dear poetic tools for me the past few weeks and this is just magnificent.
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Ina said:
Wonderful words worth while 🙂
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Donna Swanson said:
These would be fun to try! I was intrigued by your ability to make sense of single words strung together; seemingly haphazard, but containing meaning.
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soulprincess said:
Purvi, I enjoyed this attempt at something different..
very alliterative too..
cheerz,
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NcMerci said:
Delightful discovery 😀
I like your ode and I appreciate it alot because I feel like the word choices had to be carefully picked, since it is all alliteration, just to say you want your “rock” to be there through the ups and downs…
LOved it!!!!!!!
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ladynimue said:
Awesome !!! truly splendid 🙂
Thanks for the link to this beautiful take on love and poetry at its best 🙂
PS : you have a beautiful blog !
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Shelli Carlisle said:
fun, creative, original, love it
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robin said:
beautiful… glad i visited.
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Stafford said:
Fun to do and fun to read, so who cares of the words drove the meaning!
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mairmusic said:
Fun to say and feel the syllables slip off the tongue. nicely done.
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Sara Potenza Nicholls said:
“gods genuine grace generously granted”
Unique. I love your writing!
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sparrowsong said:
The alliteration gives this a stream of consciousness feel to it. I like it!
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irisdeurmyer said:
You have some great alliterations in this poem!!
Iris
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J.R. said:
Love the catchy alliterations but too the fact that they were not chosen without purpose. All together it is lovely and memorable! Thanks of sharing!
J.R.
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Dream Trekker said:
love the word play!
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Jamie Dedes said:
Clever and colorful allteration on love. Nice done, Purvi.
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Becca Givens said:
Nicely accomplished with purpose and meaning in the selections … very clever!!
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