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adjectives, alliterations, characteristics, concept, elements, figures of speech, idea, lover, nature, pen-portrait, picture, qulaities, reverie, rhyming words, symphonies, synonyms, temperament, vision
Not literally on the fixed pattern of an ode, but the feel is of one. 🙂 Attempted by me and my friend. It has a few uncommon words whose meaning too is not the typical lexical meaning often construed, but yes, very much lexically & contextually accepted ones in English. Pardon us for that but it was an attempt. They are what you said two different pieces. The link is the last line in between , there … to add continuity but yes his lines talk about his idea of his lover and mine talk about my lover’s .. 🙂 This poem is also for Thursday Poets Rally 41
The Most Creative Poet Award
Siddharth says~~~~~~
singing soft syllables stitching symphonies
melodiously mending, mellowing my miseries…
toiling through tough turbulent testing times
salvaging souls spreading sweet smiles …
collected, cool companion candidly confronting complications
livid lively levitating lustrous, love’s laminations….
emotional enduring ecstatic enchanting eyes ensnare,
foster faith, flaunt feelings, forever, fires flare…
holding hands, healing hurt, heralding harmony
moulds my mind, makes me merry
gods genuine grace generously granted
tumultuous time terminates, thanks to thee…
start ! speak ! say something serene,
Senorita , sing symphonies…..