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bed, bells, chiming, fragrance, lilies, melt, memories, music, night, notes, perfume, picture, rain, roses, scent, sleep, sprinkle, stars, stillness, tinkle
While melting into the bed,
she slips a glance out of the window
And catches a stunning glimpse
merging with her own shadow..
The lilies stand in silence
like testimonies of time
Hanging their heads,
their drooping bells do not tinkle,
they do not chime.
The perfumeries of white jasmine
penn sweet silent notes
to the blue-black night
Bathed in serene stilness,
the moon glistens like a drop of pearl,
luminous
from behind the curled clouds that hide
A handful of shiney stars,
a sprinkle of rain,
a pinch of glowing memories,
a twinkle of moments that never show again..
The fragrance of roses
lingers on the borders
in mute admiration
Hinting on the notes
of the music of the heart..
Spreading
the scent of love’s sensation. :))
Neetish said:
good stuff
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Purvi said:
Thanks a milion Neetish for always patronising me! :))
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Mahomed Fazel said:
Very lyrical and beautiful … the imagery of flowers and fragrent scents as well as the moon , stars , clouds … all paint an idyllic and heavenly scene which is both timeless and resilient ..
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Purvi said:
Fazel, Your words are so beautfiul, make me feel glad I posted the poem here! :)) ThanQ for dropping by!
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trisha said:
what a gorgeous poem. full of beautiful fragrance.
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Purvi said:
Trisha, Thanks dear, its a pleasure to have U read it. 🙂
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Jingle said:
elegant piece,
love the lotus pond image.
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Jingle said:
Dear poetic friend: how are you?
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/poetry-potluck-bedazzled.html
our poetry potluck is open, if you have poems (old or new) to share, link in NOW,
you can link up to 3 poems, the more you share, the happier we are.
Thanks for the participation! Tuesday 8pm is the deadline to link up, please hurry up!
Happy Monday Poetry Potluck!
Happy Tuesday!
miss you and hope to see you in our place.
xxx
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創業 said:
I find myself coming back to your web-site only because you have lots of awesome insights and also you happen to be at this a while, which is very impressive and tells me you know your stuff.
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Olivia said:
Hey Purvi Dear, how have you been? Missed you in Rally too.. xox
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Olivia said:
Sweetheart, reading your words, I had felt as if I was transported to a different world. A garden of Eden maybe.. what you have described sounds even more alluring.. I wish I could get inside the images and view the beauty myself!
Loads of Love
xox
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Olivia said:
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html
Hello, friend:
Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…
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Jingle said:
Hi, poetry potluck only opens for 48 hours, I placed your link in Poets Rally, which is still open for submission….
Please visit participants list to fulfill the requirement, thanks a ton.
love your sweet nature.
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Julie Jordan Scott said:
Love all the luminous images. THANK YOU!
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Katherine Shaw Poetry said:
Great writing, thank you for sharing Kx
http://kashaw.wordpress.com/2010/09/12/the-beginning-by-k-a-shaw-2010/
http://katherine-shaw-poetry.com
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2zpoint said:
The smell of love and the scent of a rose the flower of love I like the layers of thought that you are touching with this.
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Leo (Leonnyes) said:
ah.. this is beautiful, Purvi 🙂 the line about merging with her own shadow was especially nice 😀
My Potluck Poem Is HERE:
http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/05/the-elements/
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