My Hearts Whispers ~
not to fly in the air,
or to walk on water,
but to be with you. ♥♥
When U shall come to meet me to be just mine
I shall wear pink flowers and sprinkle the scents of your name
I shall wear trinkets with little bells that chime with your rhymes,
I shall dance in poesies to the music of your words that U write for this dame
I shall breath warmth into the moist palms of your heart,
I shall walk soft in the glory of your jingling magical verses..
Then do me a favor, pen me a poem , only for me,
for my kohled eyes, lovely lips & careless tresses 😉
I shall wear wreaths of your tingling kisses
And The posies shall be fragrant of your cologne
When we shall be sans world, only in arms of each others’ company
When we shall walk together the sunrise beaches , the two alone ~~
So Listen my Soul,
listen to my whisper quietly ~
Fly to freedom tonight, fly free.
Fly away forever to reach that is thine
the one who is mine, reach to him thee,
it is time for both to mingle with eternity.
Fly, fly thee!! Flutter away, release this body !!
Purvi's Purple Petals 
The poem is very artistically written as it begins sensually, castes a spell on the reader depicting the union of two loved ones…And it ends poignantly urging and describing the wrench that a ‘soul’ and ‘body’ have to undergo. Beautiful and passionate , yet very poignant and heart rending.
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Jyo sir, this was realllly kind of you.. to be so quick and caring to post such a niiiiice comment here. Am really thankful !
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Really, the poem leaves a very wonderful aftereffect of warmth and contentedness… despite the fact that the person is not present, it’s the positiveness and dreaminess in the poem that make the unison an event worth looking forward to..
a lovely one, Purvi…
and yes, the age of the poem simply doesn’t matter… it’s the essence in it that does the trick… 🙂
xoxoox
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Kavita, am GLAD you appreciated it soooo much! That is such a warm gesture :)) My heartfelt thanks dearie.. hugs and kisses for you kind soul :))
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love the poem till “……the two alone” ….dat cheered me up ….beautifully written purvi …. 🙂
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Abhipsa.. hugs sweetie.. you are always there to cheer me up.. love ya girlie! :))
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It so beautiful…loved the starting lines
” The miracle is
not to fly in the air,
or to walk on water,
but to be with you”..mesmerising 🙂
I went through the whole poem in a trance or the poem put me in a daze, i cannot say..
Hope you’ll always write this beautifully 🙂
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Rashmi.. your love, friendship, encouragement, always come as such a positive push for me.. am sure your wishes will help me hold my quill back. Love ya dearie.. And keep reading me, and sharing your works.. its lovely to read you too :))
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But that cannot be ?
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm – very beautiful as all of the above readers have pointed out …………. Love it ………….. from the heart
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Written by a soul so in love. Lovely to read.
Rosie
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nice romantic and passionate poetry:)
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VERY compelling. It makes me think of Song of Solomon in the Bible.
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This is beautiful!!!! And I love your blog lay out! I am excited to read more of your stuff! thanks for you sweet comment on my blog! You are very kind!
~L http://www.untitledmoments.com
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amazing piece.
thanks for sharing…
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Lovely! 🙂
It definitely mirrors my post. Why is loss is expressive, I fail to understand. While fulfilment is just silent….
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Thanks for visiting travel-i-tales. Your take on ‘whispers’ is interesting, filled with torment and passion. I like the last few lines when the soul is asked to flutter away.
Rosie
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some cute thoughts, beautiful image.
🙂
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Agree that the heart always whispers but not shout. It’s an excellent piece about hearing our heart speak.
Keep the poems coming!
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” The miracle is
not to fly in the air,
or to walk on water,
but to be with you.”
this is beautiful purvi!
a very heart-felt poem.
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love indeed 🙂
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Beautiful! This is so smooth and romantic. Love your style!
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