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cloud, dark, emotion, heart, lightening, mind, sentiments, silver lining, story, the end, thunder, weekend writing challenge
Where is the silver lining at the end
Of my thoughts in a dark cloud ?
My heart too is struck by lightening ,
My emotion too thunders loud.. !
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Proud recipient of The cutest Blogger Award
gifted by the Jingle Poetry Community 🙂
Purvi's Purple Petals 
Nature is great at expressing our feelings, isn’t it?
=)
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Surely Sue. I connect a lot to nature. And that is one reason, almost every poem of mine will find an aspect of nature covered in it. Thanks for reading through dearie. 🙂
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Very nice! Charged with emotion!~Ames
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Thanks a lot Ames. This was something that was honestly running in my mind., thanks to the pic I have attached ..
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well said sis … very well said ………….
And it requires real skills to write spontaneously in under given number of words … hats off
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Thank you so much bro 🙂 You are always so encouraging, feels great to have you so eager for my pennings 🙂
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My pleasure ……. you write so good and always fitting to pieces
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I like this thanks for posting, much appreciated WS
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Thank you for dropping by 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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I have thought these words before, even shown them on my sleeve. Nice one.
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Thanks 🙂
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Emotions as thunder…yes. very much so. Wonderful metaphors!
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Thanks a lot sis.. Am glad you appreciate 🙂
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I truly felt the emotion in that. I often have days that I feel that way.
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yes Donna, this is something that happens in the most turbulent of times.. Thanks for reading dear. 🙂
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What powerful imagery and energy in so few words. I can relate to this piece, having suffered the unspeakable loss of my husband and having an old flame come back into my life two years later. Wonderful poem.
Namaste……….cj
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You ahve actually honored me by referring my verses with two big events of your life, painful and life changing, I can only thank you for dropping by and feeling related. Namaste. Bless ya. 🙂
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you truly make me smile,
this shows your talent perfectly,
the end of emotions, with thundering and lightening.
love the imagery from these words.
🙂
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Thank you so much Jingle. :):) This is truly like an honor for me, to be appreciated by you. Plus, you leave such a wonderful feeling of bonhomie. Hugs for you dear! >>:D<<
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Wow, that was awesome ! I love the way you used comparatives to draw me in and then the message !
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Thanks a tonne. 🙂 I am glad you were able to realise the depth and intensity of the verse. Have a great week. 🙂
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I think I’ve been there too. Great verse!
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Oh yes? Hmmm.. must be. Thank you for liking the verse. 🙂
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very expressive, rich in your words. Nature does do wonder sometimes in bringing out the creativity.
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Thanks a bunch! I am so glad you dropped by and liked it so much. 🙂
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Well, another good one for sure! You rock!!
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Hey hey Judie ! Nice to see you here! Thank you so much! Bless ya :):)
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This was nicely done…
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Thanks a lot dearie 🙂
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Clouds. Yes Nature provides us with ready pictures of our emotions.
Nice text. Good use of the prompt.
Best wishes,
Anna
Miss O’Hara’s Last Words” SC wk 57
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Thanks a lot Anna. Nice to see you liked it. 🙂
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Very striking! love it:)
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Powerful imagery of words + image = Success!
Beautifully done ~
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What beautiful texture and imagery you wrought in so few words here.
Absolutely lovely writing.
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I am indeed taken by this pleasant surprise! I never knew, I could leave such a strong impression. Thanks a bunch for being so generous :):)
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Nicely done:) Heartfelt.
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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