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deaf, earphones, hear, listen, music, plugging, pretence, silence, soul, sound, tone, volume, zero
Honored, Delighted, thrilled to have won the Outstanding Poet’s Award, courtesy~ Jingle’s Thursday Poets rally And Jingle Poetry!! Cheers 🙂 I nominate Jamie Dedes, Shelli, Ina, Olivia, Sina Saberi, Mihir, Vinay, A B Thomas, SomeOne Is Special and Jingle 🙂
The blue jay
in the month of may
just wanna be quiet
Don’t wanna speak
dont wanna talk
I am too tired.
Plugging in the ear-phones
volume-music at zero tones
I lose the world to silence.
My Silence(s).
My codes of silence(s).
My pretences of silence(s).
Purvi's Purple Petals 
neat! very beautiful verse about the blue jay from the purple jay? 😀 I liked this! deserved honor, that badge! congratulations.
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hey! That was quick! I was right now clicking onto your link to comment.. hahahha! wonderful.. Thanks Vinay, I loved ur comment! 😉
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congrats ^_^
Be blessed stay blessed!
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Enticing as always!
Purvi, you writes are so enchanting.. 🙂
I love birds.. blink!!
Hugs xox
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charming, thanks for the treat smiles.
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I love the sound of it! Congratulations 🙂
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The very heart of your writing while appearing reasonable at first, did not settle perfectly with me after some time. Somewhere throughout the sentences you actually managed to make me a believer but only for a while. I still have a problem with your leaps in logic and one might do well to help fill in those breaks. In the event that you can accomplish that, I will undoubtedly end up being fascinated.
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Love the directness and simplicity of your poems.
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kind of sad,
silence is cool
way to keep yourself true and from feeling blue.
crispy and fun word flow.
love the images.
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i loved the second section. the silence or the lack of it in your verse makes it really cool.
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that was every-bit-lovely.
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I like these haikus.
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Nice words about the silence…well done
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Makes you think doesn’t it?
Cheers.
Rahul/Foxy
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congratulations on the awards
wonderful writes, straight from the heart. Loved the second one the most.
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Very beautiful Purvi, thank you and thank you for your visit. Stay Creative!
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Silenced with admiration. 🙂
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Wonderful piece! I like the contrast between the the song and silence.
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Loveöy flow in your poem, and congrats:)
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*lovely:D
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powerful silence..
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Very nicely done. Congrats on the award.
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