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alive, beat, calling, chest, codemark, engraved, entwine, eternal, feelings, heart, hurt, lock, love, mingling, musk deer, song
If & if I’ve hurt YOU
( I wont say that I didn’t ever do..
But always thought,
To my this, you are used to..)
My ‘ I am Sorry ‘
a million Galaxies could fill
as much as I wanna fill them do
.
You never worried me,
never lemme skip my beat
Why do you do this All the Time?
( Although Darling ! That has made You mine ! )
.
You shouldn’t lie to me now atleast
The pain You have must be really deep
‘Tis still not Out of the Chest called Heart
Locked in its Secret pocket with my name as codeMark
.
That pain, till its out & Gone
Will give its calling all along
& You like the Musk Deer
will go running around
To reach that deep strong sad familiar sound
.
It has to be reached
& heard & heeled
Through me, You need
that heeling to come through
Gimme a chance babe, Gimme a moment true !
.
I’m Alive coz You love me
The Day You gonna leave,
I’m gonna kill Me
nothing in Eternity’ll change
I’ll stay the same,
forever the same,
never to change
(Except for some Tears here & there that’ll fall as rain)
.
You’ll unite Me some time later above
Although, like, ever, You’ll again be Late, my Love
There’s no proof but if you remember
You are my Twin Soul that’s to entwine mine Sooner or Later
.
We ARE ‘The Same’ that met to separate to meet again
So in every life, hence, We’ll be doing the same.
It has to go on till We unite to merge forever
Absolving the Sins that sent Angels to Earth to suffer
.
Look Up to me for that eternal coming..!
You are ever So Caring Ever So Loving
Thats the thing that’s kept me moving
Nothing could be more endearing.
Now is the calling from Heaven coming
Now is the Time for eternal mingling!!
P.S. ~ An old penning
SunShine Blog Award (Courtesy Jingle Poetry Community)
Purvi's Purple Petals 
good that ur bloggin again
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Hehehe! Thanks Neetish. 🙂 Who else to begin with the support than old connoisseurs of my pennings? 🙂 Thanks a bunch 🙂
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the poem is like a 62 scored by Tendulkar, pretty good but then expectations are really high … keep writing
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Sure!! Thanks a bunch for the precious critique. Will sure take care. 🙂
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But since you say its an old penning so it settles it 😉
all you need to do is continue writing with the same enthusiasm, your audience loves you in any case.
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Ahaan! Now my collar is high:))) I can’t say how much I’m humbled. Though it is said the goodness lies in the person who speaketh of others’ well. ThankQ so much for the constant encouragement. 🙂
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Keep up the good work. I am sure you will continue to enthrall your own self and those who admire your writings.
Do take a break if you have to. But remember the old saying, ” The more you use, the less you lose” ……….That is about the brain and its creativity.
All the best.
JYO
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Dear Purvi,
Keep up the good work. I am sure you will continue to get the “Poet’s high” as you write and will enthrall all those who admire you for your writings. I am one of them.
However, you may take a break if you need one. But, just remember the old saying about creativity of the mind – ” The more you use, the less you lose ”
All the best.
JYO
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“You’ll unite Me some time later above” – words of hope for the twin soul that was left behind.
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yes Suzi Cates, That was the very hope I tried to offer in my words! I am glad U dropped by! Thanks a tonne :):)
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