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blunt, emotions, feel, knaves, knees, knives, love, messages, mind, silent, smile, strong, walk, weak
As I sit alone
in my mind U walk in
and then not a moment goes
that I may not smile from within
And all those silent smiles I have for U
so when U read my messages
do U smile quietly too?
All my knives are blunt for U
knees weak, yet steady with U
How do I explain?
But U do know.. Don’t U?
And all these and those emotions
rise through you
Do you feel me similarly too?
I dont know what U do
but some days U make me
fall all the more in love with you.
Do U feel ever so too?
golden-cup-award
NomadSage said:
Your poetry is all very good! I shall have to follow you!
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Purvi said:
Thanks thanks thanks! I am delighted 🙂
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Olivia said:
I do Purvi!
I love the realistic imagery that you sketch- detailed and absolutely to fall in love with.. sigh!
Hugs xox
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Purvi said:
Olivia, ur such a sweetheart! I am delighted to see YOU here 🙂 Thanks a bunch munch dearie! 😉 🙂
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shoelessboywonder said:
Such a great poem, i love the concept of the knifes being dull for love your defenses are down great job and here is a link to the evil nursery rhymes be warned though some are more evil than others
http://shoelessboywonder.wordpress.com/category/evil-nursery-rhymes/
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Purvi said:
Thanks a tonne shoeless, I visited your site and enjoyed the poems a lot! 🙂
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ashbeezone said:
Heyy nice 1 …
Love the flowing emotions in every stanza
Here’s mine stuff !!!
Happy Rally !!! XD
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Andy said:
Aw..how sweet. Love has that effect.
Love the play on words “All my knives are blunt for U”.
Nicely done, Purvi!
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Jingle said:
fall in love all over again?
wow.
superb sentiments,
well done.
🙂
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Henry Clemmons said:
Love a love poem. Very well done. Excellent.
http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/just-man-recording-is-above.html
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ankush said:
I loved the conversations of the inner mind! And incidentally my post is also knives, although for a different purpose.
And I loved the use of simple words to bring out strong emotions. 🙂
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Purvi said:
haha! That was great to know 🙂 reading ur post now 🙂
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Virtual Sinner said:
A very good poem. I hope “U” feels the love.
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Purvi said:
Oh yes.. he did. Thank You!! Bless you too 🙂
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Ina said:
Always a gamble if the other is just as much interested… loveley poem!
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Purvi said:
yep! You got it right! 😉
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thoughtsnotlost said:
There’s a great lightness in your words. You made me smile as I read!
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Purvi said:
I am glad you felt so! keep smiling! 🙂
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Broken Sparkles said:
Sweet emotions! Nice to read!
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Purvi said:
Thanks a bunch!
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mindlovemisery said:
I agree with shoeless on this I like the sense of surrender when you let your defenses down. Very romantic!
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Purvi said:
Ah! You made my day with this add on comment! 🙂
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genebrother said:
Enjoyable poetry.
I feel it would be much better if you replaced the “U”‘s as it stopped the flow and thought.
Keep writing.
Genebrother
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Purvi said:
Oh yeah genebrother, I wish I cud help that, but the poem was specific to someone.. so the address. Thank you for liking the poem overall 🙂
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Someone is Special said:
hey awesome.. i love your words.. here is my cute tune on nature
Someone is Special
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bendedspoon said:
got to giggle, love it! the title is awesome too 🙂
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Purvi said:
heheh.. yeah.. this was loads of love with a spoonful of fun thrown in! 😉
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pure2core said:
Woooow! that’s a gr8 one….Amazing and superb expression of love…
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Purvi said:
Thanks a tonne! That was such a generous compliment 🙂
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meiro said:
lovely as always Purvi.
Hugs
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Purvi said:
Am so glad you liked it again meiro.. Hugs 🙂
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NomadSage said:
Reblogged this on Nomad-sage's Blog.
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