Long after You leave,
I stare into the night-sky of my monitor
wishing for You to shine back.
Once star Spangled,
now the sky is all barren,
with all its stars & shimmer stolen
by your mischievous shining eyes
You have hidden behind a dark cloud..
That with me sheds a few Tear Drops
as it unknowingly cries
Bursting are thunderbolts with diamond
ruby emerald ‘sparkles’
shattered across
the empty vast cart
tiny swaroski shards
of delicate crystal
~ my broken heärt
seer through, tear through
to push more pearls out
from a black & white spout
as, for YOU, the soul
yearns, pines & shouts..
Yet I shine in my smile
The luminosity of Your words
Has left me softly litUp.
Warm & smiling in your thoughts,
This starlight I borrowed
Will keep me alive another day.
Just one request..
Ah! Mercy! Your reviving visit gift me!
Do me this pious favor
& earn a blessing forever..
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Thank you Thursday Poets Rally for the Perfect Poem Award. 🙂
I nominate Leo, Jingle And Baishali for the next award.
promising poets parking lot said:
pearls, pines and shouts..
love the imagery, beautiful poem,
bless your talent.
xx
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Purvi said:
Thanks a tonne Jingle 🙂
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zzbaggins said:
beautiful purvi! 🙂
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Purvi said:
Thanks a bunch zzbaggins:)
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Life: Between the lines said:
“my broken heärt
seer through, tear through
to push more pearls out
from a black & white spout”
wow! what a state of yearning! This is lovely, touching, sad, well done!
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Purvi said:
yes, U got the right words to quote.. thanks for touching the deeper emotions.. 🙂
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Psyche said:
again, Very perceptive use of words here. Well done 🙂
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Purvi said:
Thanks thanks!! I am glad U liked it so much :):)
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Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe said:
well deserved, thanks for the acceptance and nomination.
Cheers.
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charlesmashburn said:
Beautiful images made real with well chosen words. Good writing.
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Jingle said:
Happy Rally.
amazing imagery …
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Ina said:
Such a lovely romantic poem.
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mindlovemisery said:
Well-deserved award, stunning imagery, your poem is filled with such longing and agony beautiful
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deeju said:
Beautiful layout of your blog, Purvi…good essence of poetic words, glad to spot your blog, shall follow you!
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antomaniax said:
Good one!
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anicalestrange said:
“Yet I shine in my smile
The luminosity of Your words
Has left me softly litUp.”
— i like these lines. good job! 🙂
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