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admiration, bright, call, clouds, coaxing, depression, dial, Flower, hope, light, love, mist, nature, Need, night, phone, rejuvinate, replenish, shelter, shine, sparkle, star, sun, sun-dial, sunshine, twinkle, warmth
The sun dialled my number
and called up at night
Told me in a confessional code
’twas tired of shining so bright
Needed a break He desperately
wanted to hide in hay
sinking and rising was part of life
now he just wanted to stay away
seeking covers of clouds for shelter
often led him scattered helter-skelter
He wanted now a permanent recluse
Too tired, exhausted, he felt abused.
He too was a star he said
he wanted to twinkle at night
lost amongst a crowd of sparkles
he would share his light
Forgotten has He
That night turns to day only
When a star smiles wide
replenishing, rejuvenating life.
Today a flower called Hope
is asking the sun for his warmth
The flower needs to smile
It is only the sun that can
make it bloom for a while
Is the Sun wllling to dry
the mist that envelpos him
And share his awesome rays
Shedding his inhibitions some ?
Purvi's Purple Petals 
Nice One Again….Loved the colours and the pictures like I always do….Getting little bit used to blogging:):)
And By the way,the next time Sun dials your number,please tell him to dial my number as well.I am sure Sun will obey you:)
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Adarsh, I am so so so glad U liked it ! Thanks a bunch buddy 🙂 And I’ll speak to the Sun about obliging you 😉
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Lovely poem and beautiful pictures. Have fun celebrating your birthday.
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Angela, Thanks a lot for ur lovely wishes and appreciation. Thanks for making me feel good. 🙂
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greatly stated! 🙂
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Bella, am so glad U liked it ! Thanks :))
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very nice purvi! 🙂
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jeff, that’s a wonderful surprise ! Thank You :))
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special, sweet, beautiful… i really loved it.. fresh like the sunrise
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Purvi, this is so delightful. I’m charmed. What a fancy.
Here to – among other things – wish you a happy birthday and let you know you are featured here:
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/02/sunday-rally-dispatch-02062011.html
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That was really brilliant job! The sun dialing your number? Great idea! I love the image that says that every new sunrise gives a day with hope … Absolutely beautiful! Loved it!
Happy birthday, I saw it was on Sunday dispatch! Be happy, always!
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Greetings! How are you?
I am Blaga, Community Consultant Assistant from Jingle Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
You are welcome to join us this Sunday for our Monday Poetry Potluck Week 21, we are open 8pm, American Central, will remain open for 72 hours,
First time participant is encouraged to share 1 to 3 random poems or poems unrelated to our theme.
Sign in to follow our blog if you can!
Week 21 Theme: Aims, Goals, and Ambitions
xoxox
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colorful and beautiful ….outstanding work…
Welcome Join Jingle Poetry Potluck week 21,
Feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems or random poems, cheers.
Love your talent demonstrated here,
Hope to see you share.
xxx
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Surely Jingle, I would love that too! had been hospitalised meanwhile and my PC also didn’t really help me connect, so wasn’t in last week. here I am, with my entry, this very one. 🙂
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poem about sun = win!!
I liked it..please give him my number 🙂
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Glad to see you in.
get well soon.
Cheers, truly loved this one.
A++
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very colorful and alot of patience goes with this- great effort to make it a joyous read! here’s my potluck~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/broken-home/
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Sun dialling your number..what a super idea…
Enjoyed your poem very much..
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Clever idea, well executed.
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