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board, bus, complicated, diaries, gibbersih, girl, Life, muse, noise, notes, painful, pen-picture, pictures, politics, rain, rainflower, recognize, wild
And somewhere a rain-flower grows in the wild.
I am just not the girl that fits into your life.
Though I look through your diaries and notes, pointing out at pictures, going, “That’s me !”.
Yes, you write painfully close, but so do many other people.
Even if I don’t make their muse.
And luckily, they write better, because they don’t read me half-wrong.
Your garbled tales of related and non-related -isms, world-politics and yourself
sound like the gibberish noise of rain-fall on the asbestos sheets above-head
and the pelting beats breaking in through a triangular gape in the roof of the corridor.
You and I are not so “We’ after all.
Let me be the paint-picture-girl of your dreams,
the one who waits for the bus at the street corner
and leaves you each day with a new wistful clover of thought, after she boards the bus.
Jingle said:
awesome…
wishing your dreams coming true.
Happy Birthday ahead.
Cheers.
🙂
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budhaaah said:
Nice write. Here’s wishing you a very happy birthday! 🙂
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Lyn said:
Best to walk away from some attachments..it’s a wide world, after all!! Very good poem…And Happy Birthday to you!!!
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kathe w said:
Happy Early Birthday wishes!
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hernamewaslaughter said:
I like this very much.
The rhythm and the style and the last three lines especially.
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shail said:
I like the fact that you said,
“You and I are not so “We’ after all.” 🙂
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halfwaybetweenthegutter said:
This is stunning; so well written. Love!
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ashbeezone said:
Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!
It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
some of my Haiku Collections
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/
and also, on my very recent Work as well
!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!
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crayfish said:
It seems so often the case that writers bump into other writers and love ensues. You’d think writers would understand each other but they can equally be poles apart.
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eflores3000 said:
This is nicely written. Many emotions, painted into one.
-Erick Flores
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