Winters are around
and I have clean-dusted the window
to let the sun stream in..
Intoxicating ! The warm sun
that feels as delicate and comforting
as the taste of
the smooth naked shoulder of yours,
and it tingles me like your breath.
The breeze rubs
teasing as your touch does
like the back of your palm
on my cheeks and silken arms,
till they slide away into the day
to give way
to more mundane things.
The day is a room
that has blooms
sprouting smiles in a vase
of your memory in the corner of my mind.
Sunshine On my Shoulder..
29 Wednesday Dec 2010
Making the reader read at your pace with soft,guided and carefully planted words.. very good!
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Nice to hear from U Rohan. 🙂 How have U been doing? Thanks for the like 🙂
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Jahan bhi dekhu main
Tumhi nazar aate ho
Door ho tum, shayad
Yaadein to paas hai
Wahi lamhon mein ho
Tum mere lamhon mein
Beautiful poetry, Purvi.. and it is nice to see some people everywhere we look. It brings pain at times, but a lot of comfort too. Well paced poem, a delight to read.
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Leo, Ur always so very encouraging, feels awesome to have a reader like U! Thanks for reading my posts 🙂
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Happy Poets Rally!!!
So happy I stumbled here 🙂 I am adding you as a new fave! 🙂 Beautiful penning poet!
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Thanks a million for ur encouraging and kind words! I am so glad to have a reader like U 🙂
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Flowing words, lovely.
Happy new year!!
http://meirozavian.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/water/
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ThanQ so much! 🙂
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A warm welcome to the wintery chill ,it is. A short yet intense poem, Purvi.Your lines
” The breeze rubs
teasing as your touch does
like the back of your palm
on my cheeks and silken arms”
…reminds me of a poem ‘THE KISS OF WIND’ by one of our poet friends. I am sure you would have read that too.
Well written and keep it going in the New Year too. HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Wow! What a beautiful poem U have compared my work too! its a pleasure to have U drop in here! Cheers 🙂
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lovely piece.
hope to see you entry in the rally …
happy 2011.
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Sure dear, I did enter I guess, and I am doing my bit too 🙂
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welcome in, have a smiling last day of 2010…
best wishes for 2011.
you are wriitng extraordinary poetry here, keep it up.
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Jingle, love U so much! what else to say? Ur ever so encouraging! Thanks and hugs :))
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That is just beautifully sensuous. Lovely…
Happy New Year to you!
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Your works are no less! I am glad U liked my work 🙂
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WOW..what a beauty here! soothing verse..new to the Rally but definitely enjoying every post!
🙂
http://mysunshineforeverblogger.blogspot.com/
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Dear Desert Rose, first of all, i really like ur name, reminds me of my fav Sting number 😉 Secondly, what a coincidence that ur blog name is so close to the post u have here commented on! Enjoy the rally and keep dropping in for a sup of the poems 🙂
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I am a crazy fan of ur pennings! Feels elated to have U drop in here! Hugs! 🙂
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Lovely and heart tugging… how I love the sunshine on my shoulder too!
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Thanks a lot Shweta! it feels so so good to have the soft sun fall on everyone! :))
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A real breath of fresh air! Sunshine has given me some shine in my life.Happy new year!
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Thanks a lot! Feels great to be so appreciated! its a pleasure to have fellow readers feel so good. 🙂
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This is lovely. Beautifully paced and sensuous.
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sunshine on my shoulder what a lovely title for a beautiful poem! thanks for sharing and happy happy new year!!
http://peachpitproduction.wordpress.com/2010/12/07/darkness/
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Your heart carries the memories throughout the day. A beautiful sensual love poem. Very enjoyable.
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beautiful piece, thanks for sharing
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Tuffi, loved ur work too 🙂 thanks for dropping by. 🙂
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Beautiful poem…Nice
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Uma, I am so glad U liked it 🙂
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very good, the way you wrote this poem!
‘The day is a room’
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Ina, U r usually the first one I read.. dotn know how or why it happens! 😉
Thanks for dropping by and making my blog feel so good! 🙂
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Great images and rhythm. I love the internal rhymes. Makes me feel warm inside!!!
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Thanks a lot mam! Just visited ur blog too! enjoyed. 🙂
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quite an amusing trip you took us on 🙂
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O really? 😀 I am glad then! 😉
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I love that I have to read it at the “just woke up” pace like the sun just hit my eyelids and I’m trying NOT to get up. 🙂
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Wow! This is so beautiful a comment! I love that lazy tone of ur feel of my poem.. thanQ so much for enjoying it. 🙂
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“Sprouting smiles in a vase”
Wondeful!
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Thanks a bunch, keep enjoying the blooms Dear frend! 🙂
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wonderful and refreshing. 🙂
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Hehhe! Thanks a lot Dishi 🙂
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Love the soft whisper of dawn.
“sprouting smiles in a vase”
I love it! Makes me look at a flower in a whole new way.
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Wow, and I am loving it! its so beautiful when people connect to our work and see it our way! Thanks a lawwwt! 🙂
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Nice work(Finally writing this comment.Thanks for guiding)
And..again..Loved the Colors and the Pictures:)
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Adarsh, I am so happy U discovered the lovely colors of blogging life, and esp. my blog.. and saw this world in a new light [ ;)].. Hope to see U keep dropping in, now taht U loved it here. 🙂
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Uplifting, full of light, soul-stirring…Beautiful poem you shared here. Thanks.
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