7:07 PM As it gets windier.. and the chill wraps up the days,
the air whips happy moments with you.. in bubbles of smiles..
8:17 PM I hold on tight, to the mug of steaming coffee ..
clinging onto its warmth, in your absence..
10:04 PM It is too silent.. yet, the sound of our love.. keeps the record going..
and I don’t get up to switch on some noise.. in the name of television.
11:30 PM Even the Radio is not welcome now..
it is too much distraction.. from my one man thought.. You.
12:20 AM I trickle into the chamber of my dreams..drop by drop..
They have you as their occupant..
You, who drinks no water, just sips some wine
gets back to work, all the time..
U don’t see the wind or feel the water..
Jingle said:
awesome,
Glad to have you.
we are celebrating Halloween,
your piece is okay…
Thanks for the support.
get well soon.
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liv2write2day said:
This has a sad feeling to it…beautifully written. I like the sense of it being in the form of a diary or maybe text message to the one who is missing.
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Shashi said:
Very beautifully written and I relate to this very much… I can feel your sadness just like mine..
Your last lines are powerful “I trickle into the chamber of my dreams..drop by drop..” I enjoyed it throughly…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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fiveloaf said:
nice poem..
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Eric said:
Nice Potluck entry, Purvi!
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anuj raheja said:
marvelous piece of poetry
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wiserskydiver said:
chamber of dreams… one goes with the time of your words on this….
Cheers!!!
my tricky treat http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/tricky-treat/
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Reflections said:
Beautifully told evening of loneliness, waiting for that one love…
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Jingle said:
hope that you find time return favors to poets her.
Thanks for the lovely participation.
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Jingle said:
Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:
Thanks a lot for the support.
Happy November!
Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
xxx
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